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Chapter 9:A Better Start

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A Better Start:
Rainbow got up and answered the door. There stood Soarin the Wonderbolt feet away from her.
He wiped the tears from her eyes. "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to pressure you." Soarin was interupted by a filly's squeal. "LOOK EVERYPONY! THERE IS SOARIN THE WONDERBOLT!" Said an energetic fanfilly.
Rainbow quickly pulled Soarin in by the hoof. "Guys lock everything. Windows and Doors." Rainbow instructed
"Also you might want to light the fire place. There were 3 fans that hopped down my chimney."
Rainbow giggled "If I would have known that when I was a filly, I so would have done it." Soarin laughed
"Well guess what, This happened 3 days ago by 3 crazy fan mares"
Rainbow giggled once again.
"Oh yeah, Soarin what were you showing me?"
Rainbow asked
"Your presents" Soarin replied.
He showed her the Vinyl's Club Tickets. Rainbow screamed
"HOW DID YOU GET THESE! THEY ARE SO HARD TO GET!" Rainbow exclaimed.
Soarin didn't reply, he had more important stuff to tell her.
"So, I was wondering If you would be my date?" Soarin asked
"Of course I will!" Dash exclaimed.
Rainbow ran up to him for a hug but he held her back with his hoof.
"Let me finish. This present is 20 percent cooler than the last."
Soarin handed Rainbow the Wonderbolts try outs flyer.
Rainbow gasped "Really?" Rainbow asked.  
Soarin nodded.
"Close your eyes Dashie" Soarin instucted.
Rainbow did so and about 5 seconds after she did, he gave her a long passionate kiss on the lips.
Rainbow embraced him in a tight hug. "Would you like to go someplace more private?" Rainbow gestured to her friends
"Sure, will you watch a movie with me?"
"Its not about zombie ponies is it?" Rainbow shuttered when she said 'zombie'
"No not even close! You're going to love it."
"What is it!" "I can't tell you that."
"Please?"
Rainbow stared at him with her big magenta eyes. He didn't want to upset her again. So her spoke up in an irritated tone.
"Fine. We are going to watch the first offical Daring Do movie."
"Cool! They are selling it?"
"No. I got the only copy in the world for you."
Rainbow hugged him and as soon as they were about to take off into the starry night sky Soarin said, "So I guess were are offical now"
They both smiled at each other and took off to Dash's Home.
Hey guys! I can't believe I'm almost done with section 1!

Chapter 1: The Crashing Mare
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Chapter 2: The Light Blue and Rainbow Mare
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Chapter 3: This Feeling
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Chapter 4: All Alone
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Chapter 5: A Good Friend of Mine
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Chapter 6: My Secret is Spilled
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Chapter 7: The Missing Peice of my Puzzle
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Chapter 8: The Shattered Heart
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Chapter 9: A Better Start
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Chapter 10: Some Competition
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Chapter 11:The Awkward Speech
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Chapter 12: New Captain
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Chapter 14: It was Only a Dream
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